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They don't look right because you looking at the wrong side of the ship.
here:


more roundish maybe?

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I was aware it was from the opposite side, but it was my best photo of the windows, which are similar on both side But yes, the upper frame should be more rounded

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The windows are similar, but thier arrangement isn't. so goes for almost half the ships details.

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I'm afraid we're talking past each other. I'll illustrate what I'm meaning. The left is your drawing, the right is how I suggest it should look

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Ok, fixed.

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Here is another update. having some trouble with the cranes and raders. but most of the main structure is done.
Anything you see i need to fix?

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I can see that you place her windows symetrical rather than place them right It was a gift from me to you with the windows, so I wonder why you bother to undo the right view in advance for a symetric but non-right view

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In this case symetrical is right. Just look at he photo above.

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I took a look at the picture and I have to say, that Kim is right about the position of the superstructure's windows. His drawing is more accurate.
Your windows are all vertically in line, while on the picture the smaller windows below the large ones are moved to the stern.

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I wasn't talking about those windows. But here you are right.
Fixed!

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