Shipbucket

anything else wrong before i post the revision

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• USS Kearsarge crane ship No. 1(on hold) need pics
  top down weapon and plane sheets

Definitely look at spacing out the superstructure and midships section, there's a large amount of deck open at the stern that is not going to use

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i should have mentioned that space can be used for a catapult. I haven't drawn one yet and im working on equipment topdowns.
ps Should i move the rear guns back a little?

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i will edit or upgrade most posts, all previous images are on my devinart page
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work list:

• USS Kearsarge crane ship No. 1(on hold) need pics
  top down weapon and plane sheets

I know that you've decided to do top downs only, but when determining positions of guns, equipment, etc, side views will help greatly.

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I'd just go with putting the catapult in the midsection, hence you can space out your weapons and machinery ensuring a cruiser like turn of speed

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How to mentally pronounce my usernameRow-(as in a boat)Don-(as in the short form of Donald)Dough-(bread)
"Loitering on the High Seas" (Named after the good ship Rodondo)
There's no such thing as "nothing left to draw" If you can down 10 pints and draw, you're doing alright by my standards

update


Im taking a break from ships to do topdowns of airplanes

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I love alternate WWII history
i will edit or upgrade most posts, all previous images are on my devinart page
http://daa14.deviantart.com/ I am a concept artist I/E guns hull
good stuff starts on page 10
work list:

• USS Kearsarge crane ship No. 1(on hold) need pics
  top down weapon and plane sheets

i think i am better at planes

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I love alternate WWII history
i will edit or upgrade most posts, all previous images are on my devinart page
http://daa14.deviantart.com/ I am a concept artist I/E guns hull
good stuff starts on page 10
work list:

• USS Kearsarge crane ship No. 1(on hold) need pics
  top down weapon and plane sheets

The planes are really nice, and the ship is for sure an improvement!

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I love alternate WWII history
i will edit or upgrade most posts, all previous images are on my devinart page
http://daa14.deviantart.com/ I am a concept artist I/E guns hull
good stuff starts on page 10
work list:

• USS Kearsarge crane ship No. 1(on hold) need pics
  top down weapon and plane sheets

Almost literally nothing is correct about your top-down views. It's like your sole contact of what these planes look like is based entirely on the existing shipbucket-scale side drawings and you just made a bunch of random guesses from there. The wingtips of the P-47 especially show this, as how someone else pointed that you did absolutely and obviously zero research on how the F4F's wings fold, both of which would've been corrected after doing a 5-second Google Image Search. And yet at the same time you figured out how the F6F's wings fold (same as the F4F) so you obviously know something.
Sorry to burst your bubble but...see above.