- I would post this in Alternativ universe topic
Minesweeper: Chiem class
- Bridge windows, where are they?
- Funnel, for your engines?
- Shading under overhang etc. could have been improved, look at other shipbucket drawings as an inspiration
- Study other minesweeper and see what equipment the usually have on deck.
- window color, could be a bit lighter.
- National flag is carried at stern and not bow, usually it's just a small vimpel or flag in the bow
Fast attack craft: Laacher class
- Bridge window?
- I doubt the ship will be able to carry a 60mm so high up and two of them. Fast attack crafts are usually light for a reason. I would go for 56mm (Nato standard) on forward deck, and either a 20mm or if you have to a 40mm on the aft deck, with a shield between the gun and the missile launcher, or move the missile launcher aft where the RHIB is, extend the superstructure more aft, and put the gun there, but a deck lower.
- when a ship carry missiles, we usually post the missile above the vessel.
- ship with waterjet, does not have a ruder, the waterjet is also an ruder!
- National flag is carried at stern and not bow, usually it's just a small vimpel or flag in the bow
corvette: Bavaria class
- main deck doesn't need to be the same height as the helicopter Hangar, you just lose valuable space.
- If the ship have Hangar for the helicopter, the helicopter should be posted on deck, if it's flying, then there is no Hangar and your deck height is pointless.
- Normal deck height in shipbucket is 16 to 18 px high
- You need an funnel... the smoke from the engine doesn't magically disappear by itself.... it's not a small pleasure craft.
- The angle of the propeller is wrong. a propeller shouldn't point in a different direction than the propeller shaft.
- a corvette would usually have torpedoes onboard and a launcher for those torpedoes.
- look at other drawings in the forum for underwater shading.
- and the bridge window... have you seen a warship with bridge windows almost as big as a man.
- window colors...
I recommend look at Shipbucket drawing and shading rule:
http://shipbucket.com/styleguide