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hoome6915
Post subject: Large Curiser in my AUPosted: April 29th, 2015, 5:25 pm
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* MS = Mercenary Ship
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General characteristics

Type : Large Curiser
Displacement: 31,500 tons (standard)
36,400 tons (full load)
Length: 252.5m overall
The full width : 28.5m
Propulsion: 148,000 Shp
Speed: 30 knots to 33 knots
Range: 21,500 Km at 15 knots

Armament: 12 X 12''/50 caliber guns (3 X 4)
16 X 6.5''/38 caliber Dual-propose guns (8 X 2)
96 X 40mm Anti-Air guns (24 X 4)
8 X 20mm Anti-Air guns (8 X 1)
Many 14mm Anti-Air HMG

Armor

Main side belt : 12" gradually thinning to 8"
Armor deck : 4.5''
Barbettes : 12.5''
Turrets : 12.5" face, 5" roof, 5" side and5" rear
Conning tower : 11''
In my AU, mercenaries had their own battleship like past pirate. She was the one of the battleship in mercenaries.
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ezgo394
Post subject: Re: Large Curiser in my AUPosted: April 29th, 2015, 6:10 pm
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Stylistically, it's a good start. However, I couldn't see a band of mercenaries acquiring and operating a large ship like that.

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Post subject: Re: Large Curiser in my AUPosted: April 29th, 2015, 6:24 pm
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I would go with an AMC (large fast tanker WW1/2 style raider IMO)
Design wise you look like an Alaska type (1940s) but they are not very good value v full BBs or smaller CA/CLs.
(I would also worry about the rate of fire of 6.5' DP guns)

but anyway drawing wise,
The shading at stern MG turrets looks wrong Ie it should be Dark(away)/med(side)/light(towards sun) the away bit is lighter on yours ?
Generally could do with a few details to make it less blank and more busy as well.
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