Hello Biancini!
Heuhen has already pointed out most of the things needed. A few more:
- No 2pdr quad pompoms on funnel sponsons. These things are huge, the funnel would probably fall down. And there's no way to supply them with ammo up there.
- The battleship has an awfully short forecastle. Acceptable on pre-WWI designs, but unlikely for the 1930s. The forward main turret crew is likely to be wet all the time. Freeboard on the other hand is very high, especially aft, which is not so good for stability. Maybe use more sheer forward to get the bow to the same height, and cut a little freeboard aft.
- I'd use higher masts (not much, but more than at present).
- leave some room on the CVS for boats; real ones did not have so many AA gun platforms.
- The CVS could use a little more freeboard (after all, it is likely a converted Merchant hull, with the funnel so far aft) and more hangar height (check against the planes you want to use and allow room for overhead structure supporting the flight deck). Otherwise I like the basic shape of the CVS. Maybe I borrow it for a Thiarian ship.
- you seem to use two differend types of light AA (20mm twins and 12,7mm quads). I would assume these were not present at the same time - maybe use the 12,7mm quads at the time of commissioning (and not too many of them, light AA was quite underappreciated in the 30s) and the 20mm after later refits, and then more of them.
- The cranes look anachronistic, 1910s/20s like. Newer-fashioned ones might be a good Idea.
- On real ships, portholes were rarely as symmetrical.
Greetings
GD
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