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Mitchell van Os
Post subject: WIP AU personal designsPosted: July 7th, 2018, 6:27 pm
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Ill be going for Real designs again. Had a lot of work on the ship lately but i am home now.

I also had a hard time during one month in my deployment, needed to clear off some steam so i created this (WIP though).
I am thinking of making an AU of a nation speaking English and working with Financintieri on navyships.
Maybe someone can help on a good story and countrymap somewhere of a fictional nation in Europe?

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She is designed to be independent, but also a taskforce leader.
Communication has to be top notch with a large commanding room and command center.

Her stats what i got now:
Weaponairy:
-1x Single 155mm gun
-2x Marlin WS 30mm
-4x Hitrole .50
-2x RAM-116 boxes
-64x VLS up front
-64x VLS in the rear
-4x Torpedo launcher
-4x Oto SCLAR-H
-2x WASS SLAT
-2x Rhib bays for 2 rhibs
-1x rear launched rhib (fast deploy)
-2x hangar, 1x medium halo, 1x UAV's (also UAV helo possible)

Radar suits:
-4x Apar MK2 C variant
-1x Smart-L
-1x ICAS (Integrated Communication Systems)
-4x Gatekeeper
-4x Seastar
-1x Vigile Mk2 ESM
-1x Valiant ECM
-Multiple antennas
-1x HF UAV directional antenna
-2x UHF Satcom
-2x Selex SHF Satcom
-2x Selex Ku Satcom
-2x Intellian Tv sat
-1x Selex SPS 791
-3x Navigational radar with ARPA


And then a second surprise.
A FREMM bases frigate.
Will come in GP/ASW and AAW variants.

The Insurgent Class FREMM's
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(depicted is the GP Class)

Weaponairy:
-1x 127mm LW
-1x 30mm Marlin WS
-4x Hitrole .50
-2x RAM missile boxes
-16x VLS
-8x ASuW missiles
-2x Torpedo launcher
-2x Oto SCLAR-H
-2x WASS SLAT
-2x Rhib bay
-1x hangar Medium halo
-1x hangar for UAV's

Radar suits:
-4x Apar MK2 A variant
-1x Selex SPS 798 air search
-1x ICAS (Integrated Communication Systems)
-4x Seastar
-1x Vigile Mk2 ESM
-1x Valiant ECM
-Multiple antennas
-2x HF UAV directional antenna
-1x UHF Satcom
-3x Selex SHF Satcom
-3x Selex Ku Satcom
-2x Intellian Tv sat
-1x Selex SPS 791
-3x Navigational radar with ARPA

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-F124 Sachsen class frigate
-F125 Baden-Württemberg class frigate
-Clemencau class aircraft carrier
-Zeven provincien class frigate
-Poolster class AOR
-Amsterdam class AOR
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JSB
Post subject: Re: WIP Cruiser ClassPosted: July 7th, 2018, 6:44 pm
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Looks nice my questions would be,

On CG
- Do the bow thrusters make sense (155mm Mags and flow noise near sonar?)
- Only two not three Marlin (ie is the rear one not actually two if it needs to stick out both sides?)

ON FFG
- Is the rear rib bay area sufficiently wide for Bay/funnel/Bay? (or just move them forward to the gap area with walkway?)


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Mitchell van Os
Post subject: Re: WIP Cruiser ClassPosted: July 7th, 2018, 6:57 pm
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JSB wrote: *
Looks nice my questions would be,

On CG
- Do the bow thrusters make sense (155mm Mags and flow noise near sonar?)
- Only two not three Marlin (ie is the rear one not actually two if it needs to stick out both sides?)

ON FFG
- Is the rear rib bay area sufficiently wide for Bay/funnel/Bay? (or just move them forward to the gap area with walkway?)

On FFG on smaller frigates you also see rhibs both end of the funnel, fremm has them there to only a little bit more forward.

On CG. Hmm maybe theres indeed to much, thrusters and mags togheter.
However for the Sonar. Bowthrusters are not used when you use Sonar.
And on the aft there are two Marlins. The edge that sticks out is like a ''walkway'' to get around the gun. Still trying to find a more beautiful way to make that stick out platform. Not satisfied with what i have now unfortunately

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Embarked on: HNLMS Karel Doorman A833
To do list:
-Zeven Provincien class cruiser
-Joint support ship all sides
-F124 Sachsen class frigate
-F125 Baden-Württemberg class frigate
-Clemencau class aircraft carrier
-Zeven provincien class frigate
-Poolster class AOR
-Amsterdam class AOR
-Minas Gerais aircraft carrier


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Post subject: Re: WIP AU personal designsPosted: July 7th, 2018, 8:13 pm
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The Norwegian frigates have there 8-10 meter RHIB next to the funnels on both sides


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Post subject: Re: WIP AU personal designsPosted: July 7th, 2018, 9:17 pm
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Hey Mitch, a few minor comments:
- The pilothouse on the cruiser seems a bit low, I would heighten this a deck for good lines of sight.
- There was a new marlin mounting drawn, more accurate in size to the real one. It can be found on the wiki IIRC
- would the deck level not be at the knuckle between hull and superstructure? your hatches all seem to extend below it somehow.
- The RAM launchers on the DD are facing the wrong way
- We have started to move away from the bright red for hull colours to an more realistic colour, you might want to join on that :P

Other then that, nice to see your drawings appearing again!

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Post subject: Re: WIP AU personal designsPosted: July 8th, 2018, 6:41 am
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Nice looking ships, bit of that western "gorshkov" vibes in the first set.

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Mitchell van Os
Post subject: Re: WIP AU personal designsPosted: July 8th, 2018, 8:28 am
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acelanceloet wrote: *
Hey Mitch, a few minor comments:
- The pilothouse on the cruiser seems a bit low, I would heighten this a deck for good lines of sight.
- There was a new marlin mounting drawn, more accurate in size to the real one. It can be found on the wiki IIRC
- would the deck level not be at the knuckle between hull and superstructure? your hatches all seem to extend below it somehow.
- The RAM launchers on the DD are facing the wrong way
- We have started to move away from the bright red for hull colours to an more realistic colour, you might want to join on that :P

Other then that, nice to see your drawings appearing again!
-Took the hull from the Italian FREMM, its brighter then the CG. Is the CG also to bright?
-Pilothouse is same height as Horizon class Destroyers and the British Daring Class
-Will fetch that Marlin drawing! Thnx
-I dont know what you mean with those hatches at the knuckle. Do you mean the ships stairs and the hatches for liferafts with slides?
-Thanks about the RAM. Always make those mistakes :)

I also had a partial CV drawn.
I am doing way to much stuff at the same time :(
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Embarked on: HNLMS Karel Doorman A833
To do list:
-Zeven Provincien class cruiser
-Joint support ship all sides
-F124 Sachsen class frigate
-F125 Baden-Württemberg class frigate
-Clemencau class aircraft carrier
-Zeven provincien class frigate
-Poolster class AOR
-Amsterdam class AOR
-Minas Gerais aircraft carrier


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acelanceloet
Post subject: Re: WIP AU personal designsPosted: July 8th, 2018, 9:31 am
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re: the pilothouse: it might be the same height as that of those ships, however sightlines are defined by the hull underneath it. You have an much larger bow in front of said pilothouse, making your vision much worse (hence why this is only an issue on the CG and not on the DD you drew)

re: the hatches: yes, those, and the RHIB bay. They all seem to extend below main deck level.

As for the hull colour, most recent drawings tend to end up in a shade like http://www.shipbucket.com/drawings/1920/file

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Post subject: Re: WIP AU personal designsPosted: August 17th, 2018, 11:46 am
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Nice, indeed first one have "Gorshkov" vibe

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